So Good?

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It was all so good
the fruit on offer
so sweet
such a perfectly ripe moment
as if the apple called out
begging to be chosen

Indeed it was good
it was sweet
I ate until I was full
and comfortable
my eyes closed
I fell asleep

That’s where it went wrong
where I found not all fruit
should be eaten
not everything sweet
is goodness

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Author: Lizzie Ginger

The girl who drowned words...

8 thoughts on “So Good?”

  1. I see what you mean, that’s very interesting. I like some of the meanings behind fairy tales, thank you for that Dom! 🙂

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